i find my eye is drawn too much to the intersection between the glow and the body.
Not sure why that is, is it because the glow is almost round ? or is it the brightness of the glow ?
The glow could blend better into the surrounding objects if it illuminated them up. As it is it is quite bright compared to the rest and draws the eye too much.
When you use "Layered Screenshot" from Curvy it saves a depth map and an ambient occlusion map as well as the colour version. I combined the depth and ambient to get the grey image above.